Carrot Ranch’s 99 word challenge this week was to write a story without ice.
“Pining for Ice”
I was separated from my unit, deployed to a critical spot at a forward operating base.
I worked sixteen-hour shifts catching sleep when I could. The a/c worked just enough to take the edge off the heat. Couldn’t even get a cool shower.
As I ate the peanut butter and crackers in my MRE I looked at the picture my unit had sent. I glanced at their smiling faces gathered around a table in a chow hall but my gaze lingered on the ice filled glasses of sweet tea in front of them as I chugged my lukewarm water.
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Awesomeness!
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Thanks!
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Well done, Tracey. It’s hard to even fathom what someone misses when deployed, the experience is so far from the norm.
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Great take on the prompt. You painted a really evocative image.
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